In this world I came pure , innocent and just me
Enchanted to be in human form eager to live the life
Impressions stamped me from left and right
Incidents playing carnage with me
Suddenly I could not be myself
As I had to evolve to fit the trend
I had to have the fierceness of tiger
In human form I should learn to attack
The process of evolution had not stopped
Reverse trend goading animal spirit to imbibe
Appearances are deceptive in the World
The real attribute is to kill and survive
Knowingly unknowingly I started to evolve
Cloaking myself the trend in which I was thrown
Facing the expectation of the beloved
Fighting the accusations of adversary
Smiling when my heart wanted to cry
To keep up the norms and façade of life
Shedding crocodile tears as expected of me
Hiding the rejoice of my heart
I was the puppet in the drama called life
Strings of society guiding my act
Each time I lost little me
Which started forming a cloned me
When facing the mirror of truth
My search for suave, successful human failed
There were two shadows facing me
My clone and I think real me
During the evolution to meet the trend
I had failed to give an identity to either of them
They wore the mask which can be called me
But none of them had integrity to be me
Close
A good poem that presents in strong lines complex ideas of internal conflict seemingly so effortlessly:
There were two shadows facing me
My clone and I think real me
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the end was really very wonderful.............which was the punch,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,good one..................
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Dear Ehsaasji,
Another gr8 poem from ur desk
I enjoyed it thoroughly......
How beautifully you have reflected on the realities....
We always try to follow the trends and not be n outcast but in the end realize being hollow.... Feeling we have lost something.......
loved ur composition.....
rgds,
aram
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Dost..........
Thankoo thankoo
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Sablu
thanks
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Prasad
The pictures goaded those words out of me the asli nakli chehra stuff was so strong in mind looking at them
Thanks for the comment
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Dost!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is one word that I can say!!!
Cheers
ME
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Nice composition
Good luck for the contest
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Ehsaas,
the expressions and feelings conveyed in your poem are excellent. the words rolled along with your thoughts.
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Madhvi
Thanks
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