I was alone
Floating through life
With the rides of joy and cry
Was always in a crowd
alone, me , myself
not really lonely
as never knew
time of being together
You entered my life
Never thought of being alone then on
In your presence or in your absence
I was never alone again
When you were not physically with me
You were always there in my thoughts
Your laughter coaxed me
Your twinkling eyes enchanted me
In the room full of people
I was in solitude with you and your love
not alone
not lonely too
as I knew you existed
being apart you too were at once with my thoughts
and that intangible link we had
which never made us feel lonely
you were always present within me
Now after four decades
That tangible link is gone
Some say you still live within me
But my heart craves for you
Then I had strength of reassurance
of your physical existence
And now
I know you wont be coming back ever again
Your soul has reached peace
Leaving me with just the feel of that intangible feelings
My heart is now not ready to be in solitude
It is lonely
And once again
I am alone.
Close
A beautiful emotional poem.....loneliness is the worse scourge on earth..and losing a loved one is the worse experience in life....
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Ajitji
thanks
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Maya
So ture at the start of life thru its journey and at the end we are alone but man has developed that social psychology where he interprets his mental state in different way ..the moment he realises he is always alone he had climbed a notch in spirituality
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Namita
Thanks sorry hamney aapki comment ka jaldi jawab nahi diya hamari nazar andaazi ke liye maafi chahtey hain
kai baar socha hain kyu jaanewaale waapis nahi sakte kyu yaado ke sahare chodd jaate hain? bus yehi thought man me lekar yeh kavita likhi thi
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a master piece..................simply great
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and who is not alone? Everyone is. its just how u perceive a relationship is what makes u think that u r not .. but ulimately, everyones goes thru their journies on their own....
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ehsaas ...its emotional ..its touching ....it pains ya it pains to loose someone who is a part of your existance .......all kinds of consolation ..the deep thoughts fail when one writhes in that pain of seperation .
u have written with amazing depth and feel .comendable girl .keep it up
namita
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Yashasvi
thanks for the luvly comment
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promilla
thanks
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wow
so emotional and soo touching
great one, how could I miss this earlier.....
so great poem brought me to the brim of moist eyes
yashasvi
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